Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Mediated Rough Draft

For many years, law makers and parents have been disputing over what the appropriate age was for a child to begin hunting. In the beginning, children under the age of 18 were not allowed to hunt at all. Yet, as time passed, the regulations kept pushing back the age that children were allowed to hunt. Many parents believe that the children of today have become too lazy, and teaching them to hunt is a good way for them to spend time outdoors, instead of sitting behind a television or computer screen. Both ends of the spectrum seem very drastic, yet when there is a negotiation that takes place, the end result is what is truly best for children that want to learn to hunt. With the inclusion of certain conditions, it is easier to let children under the age of 18 hunt freely and safely. “Hunting, in fact, is the primary--and most humane--instrument of wildlife management in much of the country” (Should Kids Hunt?). According to the Humane Society of the United States, keeping the minimum hunting age so high causes a barrier that is hard for children to deal with and understand. Yet many parents fear that letting children begin hunting too young will impair them for life. In 2005, three organizations—the National Shooting Sports Foundation, the U.S. Sportsmen's Alliance and the National Wild Turkey Federation—started Family Afield, a program designed to get governments to lower the required hunting age.

Children should only be able to hunt with responsible, well-qualified adults. These adults must be at least 21 years of age, and a fully licensed hunter. In many cases, these stipulations are made for children less than 16 years of age.If the hunting tradition is to continue, it must be passed from one generation to another” (Three Bucks). Many adult hunters want their children to see just how much fun hunting can be, the way it was for them in their childhood. The adult that they hunt with should be an avid hunter, someone who knows the hunting procedures very well. Though many of the children are accompanied by their parents, some children do not have that opportunity. So, some children must have a sponsor who is willing to take them hunting and show them the safe way to participate (Three Bucks).

In many states, children and adults are required to participate in a hunter’s safety course. Upon completion of this course, children who are 14 and older are allowed to hunt alone. “The hunter education course instills in students the knowledge and skill to be a responsible and safe hunter” (Hunter Education). With safety courses like these, students learn how to prevent hunting accidents, understand firearms, know what to do in case of an outdoor emergency, as well as many other things. The classes are open to any age, yet are required for all children ages 12 and under. The Wisconson Department of Natural Resources does not recommend taking the class until a child is at least 12, the age that children are allowed to have full hunting permits in the state of Wisconson.

“Wildlife authorities in 26 states are sponsoring youth hunting activities that teach children from eight years old and up how to shoot animals”(State-sponsored youth hunts). Many states are now holding what are called “youth hunting days.”These days are set aside during hunting season just for children. It gives children a chance to learn more of the safety rule, and how to use a firearm properly. The youth Hunting Program in Florida is also a safe way for children to learn to hunt. In order for children to participate, they must be between 12 and 17 years old, and accompanied by a parent. The Youth Hunting Program of Florida was established to increase the number of youth involved in educational, safe, mentored wildlife and hunting activities through the opportunity to participate in the hunting heritage” (Youth Hunting Program of Florida). Through programs like these, children learn the difference between hunting and conservation, how to hunt ethically, legally, and safely, and develop their firearm skills. When children have days set aside specifically for them to learn how to hunt, they will be able to learn to make wise and safe hunting decisions.

“The number of hunting licenses in the United States dropped to 14.7 million in 2003, from 16.4 million in 1983, according to the federal Fish and Wildlife Service” (Girls and Boys). Many parents feel that this is because the children are more inclined to spend all of their free time inside, rather than enjoying the outdoors. Hunting licenses are actually relatively easy to purchase, but they give the Department of Natural Resources a chance to make sure that the person trying to obtain the license has taken the proper courses. It also gives the opportunity to do a background check on the person who is trying to obtain the license.

Though the debate over what the proper age to begin hunting continues, both the parents and lawmakers agree that certain restrictions should be set in place no matter how old the children are. The decision should not be left up to the parent to decide when the child is ready, and the government should not completely ban children from hunting. Children need to be able to meet the requirements that are being set into place so that the safety of both the children and the people around them will be secure.



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1 comment:

MR. MILLION said...

TThe first sentence would read better like so: "...disputing the appropriate age for a child to begin hunting." Condense and make your sentences more active.

Where are we with "In the beginning"? Lost already.

"Both ends of the spectrum seem very drastic, yet when there is a negotiation that takes place, the end result is what is truly best for children that want to learn to hunt." This sentence doesn't perform form me. What are the ends of the spectrum?

How is it "easier to let children" hunt under the age of 18? Think about your wording.

How did we go from allowing children the opportunity to hunt to justifying hunting as a means of wildlife management? I understand the point you are making (and the next sentence is much better), but you can't just switch gears like so drastically. This situation could be fixed simply by reducing the order of some the first two sentences in that paragraph. What "barrier" is hard for children to deal with?

It gives children a chance to learn more of the safety rule, and how to use a firearm properly. --you do not need a comma there. you are not combining to sentences with the and conjunction.

The introduction needs to be cleaned up, and I would like to see more mediation of the issue. With your last statement, "Children need to be able to meet the requirements that are being set into place so that the safety of both the children and the people around them will be secure," I feel like you have an idea of what age a child is capable of understanding and knowing right from wrong. Why not suggest a specific age, then?

Ultimately, I have a hard time piecing together the reasons you present. It sounds more like an informative report than a mediation of an issue that is in a stalemate. What are the reasons for lowering the age limit for hunting? What is the legal age to hunt now? Why don't people want the age lowered? These questions might be cleared up with a stronger introduction. Because I'm not clear on where "in the beginning" references, I don't know if the limit is 18 or if it has been reduced to 14 or 12. Is each state set-up differently? Are we talking about a national legal hunting age reduction or another issue where individual state's should have the right?

What you are advocating is clear, but the presentation of your argument is not.